Title: Vampire breath
Author: R.L. Stine
# of pages:29 to 32
Date: October 17
Summary: Freddy closed the bottle and the fog are left, but when the fog are left, Freddy and Cara saw an people in the coffin, this people have a old tuxedo. When they saw him, they are very very afraid.
I find you have a very good summary but be carefull with your "an" and "a".
RépondreSupprimerGood job!!!
It's good, but is short. I think you could add text. Besides this, is very good!
RépondreSupprimerGreat job Xavier-Philippe!
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